Sunday, April 08, 2012

Patchouli Dreams - Six Sentence Sunday

Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday!

The following six sentences are from my book Patchouli Dreams. This is an erotic romance short story, available on Kindle.

Mason's pale lips formed into a thin smile, exacerbating his sexy left dimple. A duffle bag hung over his shoulder and a folded denim jacket lay over his other arm. All the breath left her lungs like she'd been internally vacuum-packed. After ten years the man she had never gotten over stood in her house looking even dreamier than before.

Marilyn's lips formed the word hello, but her voice didn't follow, so she smiled and stepped back so he could come inside.

Her Mason had returned.

Ann Cory

6 comments:

S. J. Maylee said...

oh Ann, you've created a real moment here, well done

Savannah Chase said...

Ann, another fantastic book...You know I'm addicted here..

Christine Warner said...

oohhh...loved it! Great internals.

Veronica Scott said...

Oh MY, I'm totally hooked in just six terrific sentences. Great excerpt!

Karen Michelle Nutt said...

I want to know what happens next. Great intro.

Tonya Burrows said...

I really like the vacuum packed line. Great six!