Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday!The following six sentences are from my book Patchouli Dreams. This is an erotic romance short story, available on Kindle.
Mason's pale lips formed into a thin smile, exacerbating his sexy left dimple. A duffle bag hung over his shoulder and a folded denim jacket lay over his other arm. All the breath left her lungs like she'd been internally vacuum-packed. After ten years the man she had never gotten over stood in her house looking even dreamier than before.
Marilyn's lips formed the word hello, but her voice didn't follow, so she smiled and stepped back so he could come inside.
Her Mason had returned.
Ann Cory
6 comments:
oh Ann, you've created a real moment here, well done
Ann, another fantastic book...You know I'm addicted here..
oohhh...loved it! Great internals.
Oh MY, I'm totally hooked in just six terrific sentences. Great excerpt!
I want to know what happens next. Great intro.
I really like the vacuum packed line. Great six!
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